25.03.20
The Humongous Troll
Once upon a time I was sleeping and I heard a thundering
noise. I zoomed to peer out my window and I saw a
humongous troll, covered in grass and trees. I was
trembling with fear. Everybody woke up and started
screaming, but it was a friendly troll because it had a polite
smile.
Soon the town had no people and the troll felt lonely. But
there was another troll coming and the troll didn't feel
lonely anymore. They became best friends because they
both liked going to the beach and doing ginormous
manu’s.
What was your favourite part and why?
I enjoyed using descriptive writing because I learnt some new words.
I love your use of descriptive words Kiarn. I like that the troll found a friend.
ReplyDeleteAwesome Kiarn! I too like the way you have used descriptive words like thundering and peer. These descriptive words really helped me paint a picture in my head about what was happening in your story. Keep up the great work!
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