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Monday, April 12, 2021

Scientist and Alien monster

 Narrative Writing 

Title of your writing -  Scientist and alien monster








Brainstorming of ideas 

Characters ? Scientist with backpack. Alien monster. The scientist's face looked like he was really scared, his head was shaking, he was breathing very heavily, his stomach tightened and he was wearing a white long sleeved shirt.

Setting ?  5:00AM midnight in a spaceship.

Action Rising? The Alien monster got the bag off the professor and got what it wanted: it was an orb.  

The professor jumped on the robot and pulled a wire to shut it down. Scientist hands up wanting alien monster to put claws down. 

Alien monster has its claws out wanting to get the scientists bag.

Problem? The problem is the professor pulled the wrong wire. The robot went crazy and nearly flung the professor off the spaceship. The robot couldn't see the professor. He stood still and tried to put the orb in him. The professor snuck up on him and pulled the right wire shutting robot down. He got the orb back.


Resolution?  The professor flew back home in the spaceship 



Professor and Alien monster

Inside outer space an alien monster and a professor with a backpack stared at each other. It was midnight. It was freezing cold. 

He was snuggled up in 5 warm blankets at 5:00am sitting down eating and watching the screen. He was flying to the moon in his humongous spaceship. This was his best day ever.

All of a sudden an alien monster came out of nowhere. The professor's face looked really scared. His head was shaking, he was breathing really heavily and his stomach tightened. The professor put his hands up because he wanted the robot to put its claws down. The professor jumped onto the robot and pulled at a wire to shut it down, but he pulled the wrong wire and made the monster go crazy.  He was flung off the robot and nearly off the ship. The robot stood still and tried to put the orb in his chest. The professor zoomed up on the robot, pulled the wire and shut it down.

The professor did not want to carry on to the moon. He turned his spaceship around and went home to watch a movie called, ‘The Professor and the Alien Monster.’


3 comments:

  1. wow that looks so cool you have been working hard.

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  2. wow I think that looks cool how long did it take you to publish

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