We know that wonderful sentences need:
- Detail (elaboration)
- Capital letters and full stops
- Punctuation (, ! ? “ “)
- Quality vocab - WOW words
Nouns are naming words. eg. chair, book, July, Awhi
Adjectives describe nouns. Eg. wooden chair, writing book, freezing July, lovely Awhi
Verbs are doing words. Eg run, walk, jump, skip, chew
Adverbs describe verbs. Eg. briskly running, slowly walking, jumping high, skipping happily and chewing noisily.
EXAMPLES
1 The cat is sad.
2 The black cat is sad cause it has no home.
3 The black cat is awfully sad because it has no owner and the witch is coming to eat the cat.
EXAMPLES
EXAMPLES
1. The bird is angry.
2. The bluey blackish bird is very angry.
2. The bluey blackish bird is very angry.
3. The mean bluey blackish bird is angrily staring at its mean terrifying furry prey.
Wow Kiarn, I love the descriptive words you have used in your sentence. I hope the lonely cat is able to escape the dreadful, hungry witch.
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