The Lion King - First Draft

Yesterday I went to the Lion king at the movies I got popcorn and a drink and went in to the movies at the start it was like hhhhhhhh slivenya and then I saw all of the animals then I saw mufasa and simba and rafiki haled simba then in the morning simba and mufasa woke up and went for a walk and mufasa said everything that the light shins on is his kingdom but the part that is dark is the grave yard but simba is not allowed to go there and simba went to go see scar then zazu came then mufasa  came and simba went to give zazu a fright then mufasa went to fight the hyenas then simba went to see nala and went to the grave yard and zazu came then simba and nala tried to run away but he got surrounded by the hyenas and mufasa came and they went back home then simba was stuck on a tree and he saved simba and there was heaps of bufilos and mufasa clibed to the top and scar pushed him of and mufasa died and simba ran away in the desert and saw pomba and tamon and they went to the jungle pomba sang heaps of songs then nala came to the jungle to and they all went back home and had a fight and simba killed scar and simba and mufasa wins.

   

Wonderful Sentences

I have been learning how to copy and paste from our class writing flip charts to share our learning. I know how to insert bullet points and use the highlighting tool.

We know that wonderful sentences need:

• Detail (elaboration)
• Capital letters and full stops
• Punctuation (, ! ? “ “)
• Quality vocab - WOW words

 WALT recognise different parts of speech.

Nouns are naming words. eg. chair, book, July, Awhi

Adjectives describe nouns. Eg. wooden chair, writing book, freezing July, lovely Awhi

Verbs are doing words. Eg run, walk, jump, skip, chew

Adverbs describe verbs. Eg. briskly running, slowly walking, jumping high, skipping happily and chewing noisily.

EXAMPLES

1 The cat is sad.

2 The black cat is sad cause it has no home.

3 The black cat is awfully sad because it has no owner and the witch is coming to eat the cat.
EXAMPLES

1. The bird is angry.
2. The bluey blackish bird is very angry.

3. The mean bluey blackish bird is angrily staring at its mean terrifying furry prey.